Tuesday, June 26, 2018
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Campbell, you have made a great report providing lots of information about your chosen African Animal, the Greater Flamingo. I particularly like that introduction - you have really got into David Attenborough's brain and written as he would. This makes the reader get hooked into your report. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this great report Campbell! I love the language you have used throughout this report. You have successfully combined both report and descriptive writing in a natural way. Maybe you could consider writing a children's book about the Greater Flamingo as a way of teaching children about this amazing bird. Write it so that it is both informative and interesting to read.
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ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your information report. What an interesting and unusual animal a Flamingo is!
You have included excellent facts. I never knew there were different types of Flamingos. They all look the same to me!
Have you checked your work for spelling errors?!
Next time consider how you could share your learning other than a slide :) It's good to try something new.